I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey Janel, I love your first poem about a lion. You describe that the lion was dangerous but also cute. Your last one I didn't really get but anyway Keep up the good work.
I really like your haiku's Janel, to be honest there is nothing I see bad in this post. But I think you should of add a tittle page. keep it up. And was it hard for you?
Hey Janel, I like that you did totally different topics, but this is from last year. I like the backgrounds that you did. Can you post something this year?
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Hey Janel,
ReplyDeleteI love your first poem about a lion. You describe that the lion was dangerous but also cute. Your last one I didn't really get but anyway Keep up the good work.
I really like your haiku's Janel, to be honest there is nothing I see bad in this post. But I think you should of add a tittle page. keep it up. And was it hard for you?
ReplyDeleteHey Janel really good post i love the background to this. But i think it was really short that could be something to think about.
ReplyDeleteHey Janel, I like that you did totally different topics, but this is from last year. I like the backgrounds that you did. Can you post something this year?
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