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Wednesday, October 26, 2016

First Draft By Janel

This week i have being Withing about my holiday

Firstly we got all of our things out of the car. And we walk down to the river. And my mum use her cell phone to take a photo of the river and take a photo of a very big tree that you can go inside. And they are some people that go inside of it.

Secondly  we go to the playground we just take a photo of it. We don’t play on it because that day the playground is a little bit wet so we just take a picture of it. And that was a cute playground.

Next we did a picnic and we really have fun and after we do a picnic me and my sister sit on a one branch of the tree that look like it’s gonna fall down and my sister sit on it first me is the second and my father sit on it last but my mother don’t want to sit on it because she think she’s gonna fall down so she did not sit on it   and next of course we take a picture.

We take a photo of a  many flowers. But they are not just a flower the are really beautiful flowers. And we go to a big kind of house of a many flower and there are kind of the flower that my first time to see and next we go to a cactus house maybe but we saw a many and cool cactus and one of them are so big it’s kind of going to the ceiling and some of them look like a cactus flower i think.

Next we go back to the river and feed a many ducks because my mum bring a lot of biscuit and I kind of scared because when we are going back to car and they kind of following us so my sister trow a one biscuit.

We really have fun and we go back to the car and go home.