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Friday, June 23, 2017

The girl in the red coat

The girl in the red coat

One cold and windy day. In a really really old and small village. There was a little girl dress in a beautiful red coat and named Savannah. She was walking in the street, and I think she got lost by her mother and her father or maybe her mother and father just left her in their house sleeping and then Savannah just woke up and look around their house and she can’t see her parent so she just get out of their house and lo`k for them.

She just look around all of the shop in the village one by one. She went at the grocery store because her parent might buy her some yummy and delicious food. She can’t find them there. She now leave the grocery store then go at the dressing store. Her mom and her dad might buy a surprise her with a dress. She can’t find them there. She can’t find them. She just go back to her parents. She just go back into their house and then lay in her bed and cry into sleep because she was all alone.

In the next morning.

Savannah woke up with a lovely smile in her face because she saw her mom and dad with her in the bed sleeping. Savannah go back to sleep with them. There’s a problem, she can’t go back to sleep. She silently get down from the bed and  silently walk to their kitchen. I think she’s hungry. She get a bowl and milk and last the cereal. She get the bowl and pour some cereal and milk. She ate it really fast.

Then her mum and her dad woke up. She was watching tv. Her mom and her dad watch the tv with her. Her mom get some popcorn and then go back from watch.

The End

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